WALT create a story from a video.
I found this task I found it easy because before writing we did a plan and it helped me a lot.
I used descriptive words to make my writing flow.
My next step is to use the dash to describe for words.
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Thursday, November 16, 2017
Wednesday, November 8, 2017
Flipgrid Wonder
WALT talk about the question in this task.
I found it easy because I had read the book and I had lots of ideas in my mind.
My next step is to use more of my time and not say SS.
Saturday, November 4, 2017
Yom KIppur Word Art
We are learning about a festival named Yom kippur.
I found it easy because I worked with a partner, Daniel.
My next step is to do at least 50 words about the celebration.
Thursday, November 2, 2017
August Character Visualisation
Reflection
WALT visualise a character by using the descriptive language to create a picture.
In this task I had to listen carefully to the description of august by his sister, Via and then draw him like he is described in book. I think I was bad at this task because it was very hard to do. I found it challenging because august had a awkward face and in the description it was hard to follow on. My next step is to listen carefully and follow on.
Friday, October 27, 2017
D.A.S.H
Reflection:
I am learning to write with DASH.
I found it easy because we worked in a group of 2's. I liked writing the Speech the most because we had to think about what the character say.
My next step is to use more describing words in D and A to make it more descriptive and interesting for others to read.
I am learning to write with DASH.
I found it easy because we worked in a group of 2's. I liked writing the Speech the most because we had to think about what the character say.
My next step is to use more describing words in D and A to make it more descriptive and interesting for others to read.
Thursday, September 21, 2017
Youthtown
In this picture we are playing prison.
My favorite part was when I cought the ball in full.
Next time I play I want to get better at dodging.
Character Descriptions
WALT show not tell what characters look like.
I found this activity tricky because the picture was too detailed and there was too much to write about.
My next step is to use more describing words because I want to describe my ideas in different ways.
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